深夜至黎明

Anyway, I thought it'd be a nice change if I switched gears to another language...This is my best shot at writing chinese poems but since my chinese ability is limited at best...It'd be kind of you sirs and misses to give me any helpful advice to modify it become better! And to those of you who can't read chinese to save their lives, well, better luck next time! lol... =)

仰望
无星的夜晚
倚在矮墙上
和友人谈心
享受周围的幽静
听着夜鸟鸣叫声
啊！那是多大的喜悦！

偶尔
路过的汽车
发出的引擎声
打破了深夜的黑纱
但可惜的是，
咱们的友谊
可能在黎明的到来
就会划上一个永远的句号。

可恶的岁夜！
他总不让美丽的时光
停下匆忙的脚步
只留下酸甜的记忆
来陪伴我们
继续未来的旅程。